2006春──翻譯與習作

何春蕤(週三上午9-12A-105教室)


中英文語法對比:基本辭彙、邏輯、語氣之差別

辭彙操作特質:

中文辭彙:沒有形態變化,主要靠詞語、順序以及內在的邏輯關係來表達句子的含意

英文辭彙:形態變化豐富(例如名詞有numbercase的變化,動詞有人稱、時態、語態、語氣,形容詞和副詞都有級的變化,還可以結合為複合字)

因此,英譯中,多半要加詞或變換說法來體現英語中的形態變化。

He realizes that he is not as healthy as he used to be.

他意識到自己現在已經不如過去那麼健康了。

中譯英則要善用英文的各種形態變化來體現漢語的時態、語態、語氣

他本來要去的,最後一秒鐘又改變了主意。

He had planned to go, but changed his mind at the last minute.

 

表示時間順序或因果:

英文的複合句中,表示時間的語詞可以放前或放後,時間關係的順序比較多變;中文的複合句則通常按時間的先後來敘述

He has flown in just the day before from Georgia where he had spent his vacation basking in the Caucasian sun after the completion of the construction job he had been engaged in in the South.

中文翻譯起來會是什麼樣呢?你自己玩玩看

英文的複合句表示因果及條件關係時,語詞可以放前或放後,比較多變;中文的複合句則通常是原因在前,結果在後,條件在前,結果在後

The teacher did not stop working because he was ill.

老師並未因為生病而停止工作

Everything would have been all right if you hadn』t said that.

要是你沒說那話就好辦了

I will tell him to see you if he comes back this afternoon.

要是他今天下午回來,我會叫他去找你

 

敘事和推理的順序:

英文往往先說最近的事再說先前發生的事,中文剛好相反。

英文往往先總結然後再加以闡述,中文則常常先交代然後才總結。

It was a keen disappointment when I had to postpone the visit which I intended to pay to Bangkok in January.

原本打算一月去曼谷,後來不得不延後,令我非常失望

There was a sense of urgency about their unusual action in breaking up with the president publicly on the independence issue.

他們在獨立的問題上和總統公開決裂,這種不尋常的舉動透露出一種急迫感

 

語詞的意義從來不是單一或固定的

要了解文化特徵、歷史演變、社會發展、甚至科技發展對語言的影響

要把握語言的隨意性和約定俗成性

要注意詞語的搭配關係、邏輯關係、上下文關係

這樣才可能找到最恰當的譯法

 

一個字會因為脈絡而有很多重意義

A fast car was coming.
The fast growth surprised everyone.
She loves fast music.
That was a fast journey.
We should use a fast color.
Fast films might not keep their color.
Try to use a fast oven.
They were all fast asleep.
break one』s fast by drinking some milk
The dog was stuck fast in the mud.

 

Several attempts have been made through the years to develop the deposit.(開採)

As young Tom grew into manhood, he developed tuberculosis.(染患)

A hypothesis is a specific statement developed by a scientist from observations.(得出)

Modern aircrafts are so heavy that the wings must develop a very large lift force in order to sustain the aircraft.(產生)

Until the domain theory of magnetism was developed, they did not have much success.(提出)

In developing a design, the engineer must apply his knowledge of engineering and material science.(進行)

Most of the money came from selling the secret of a new type of potato he had developed.(培育)

 

各有褒貶

Lincoln was respected by his people for his foresightedness.(高瞻遠矚)

He proved to be a mercenary guy.(惟利是圖)

Edison invented the gramophone and the electric light.(發明)

This kind of people sometimes invent excused to go out of work.(編造)

She was flattered that they had invited her.(受寵若驚)

You flatter yourself.(自做多情)