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Response to "Splendor in the Grass"

12:00 A.M.

 

It was 10p.m.  She didn』t know how long she had lain in the same posture, on the bed.  Two hours remained—she looked at the clock on the wall and pulled her blanket tighter—she felt cold even though she had wrapped a blanket around her.

She lived alone in an apartment; Alan had found it for her.  She liked what he had arranged for her.  He knew her very well.  (They had known each other since they were five years old.)  And she was her fiancée; they would get married the day after.

Silence reigned in the room.  She held her blanket tightly.  How cold it was!  She could hardly imagine how such a slim body dared to drop itself into the cold water.  The water must be much colder than her room was.

「You should go to sleep,」 she told herself.  Time was easier to pass through sleeping.  But she couldn』t.  When she closed her eyes, she saw Dora; her face was twisted in pain.  It was a horrible nightmare, she had it that morning, after receiving Dora』s call.

In her dream, she took a journey to a strange country.  There she met 三毛—a popular writer who had committed suicide in Taiwan.   三毛looked as beautiful as her photographs that she had seen before.  And they were like old friends who hadn』t met for a long time, as they went into a garden.  The garden was booming with flowers.  There was a small plant, bright green in color, which was in full bloom.  The two women watched the process of blooming together.

She still remembered every small change in the plant.  Everything was in slow motion: the plant began to sprout, new leaves began to grow, the point of the leaf began to bud then, and a small bud was produced.  While she was amazed by the mystery of life, the bud dissolved, and drops of bloods dripped onto the ground!  Soon, a river of blood formed and flowed in front of her.  She was scared.  She wanted to leave but she couldn』t move. 

「It』s a curse,」 it was 三毛』s voice, she was still standing beside her.  「Help me!」  When she tried to ask for 三毛』s help, she heard a voice from the river.  「Help!」  She saw Dora drowning in the river of blood, her face was twisted in pain.  And she stood on the bank of the river, witnessed the tragedy taking place.  She felt cold.  She felt her hands, her feet, her ears were freezing.  Still, she couldn』t move.  She thought she had died—her arms, her feet, her body no longer belonged to her.  She woke up after a long time, then.  It』s a curse, she knew.

They had made a promise before.  She promised to die with Dora on the same day!  Now that Dora had gone, she might follow her.  But it』s not fair!  She made the commitment during a fit of depression.  She thought Alan had left at that moment, she was abandoned, and Dora did love her very much.  She had no choice at that moment but Dora.  What was more, she was straight, she still loved Alan—Dora knew it!  But now Dora had killed herself and was asking her to fulfill her promise.

Dora liked 三毛,  she did too.  They liked 三毛』s book, they liked Sahara, they admired the love between 三毛and 荷西...  And 荷西 died in the water!

She shivered all over with cold.  It』s cold tonight.  Indeed, she hated Dora.  How cruel she was!  Dora knew she would get married the next day and would have a new life—a life that Dora couldn』t give her, a life that she had dreamt for a long time.  That』s why Dora intended to destroy it.  Dora threatened to disclose their relationship!  This morning she cheated Dora—she promised to die after her.  How stupid Dora was!  She believed her promise and died.  When she received the news from the reporter on TV: an anonymous corpse was found in K.River, she couldn』t deny her unbearable delight.  She had fulfilled their promise.

She looked again at the clock; everything would be all right twenty minutes later.  But there was something strange in her room: there were water stains on the floor.  She knew it had rained all day, but she hadn』t gone out since last night.   So where did the water stains come from?  All of a sudden, a knife was pushed into her body.  She couldn』t make any response, but stiffened with terror at the horrific sight.  Everything was a blur immediately.  She saw a river of blood, and she was drowning in it.

「I didn』t kill myself—I didn』t feel at ease about you.  Now, I should fulfill my promise to you,」 came Dora』s voice.  

She saw Dora pushing the bloody knife into her own body.   The clock struck twelve, then, while the telephone rang.  She knew it was from Alan—he had promised to call her at midnight to tell her that this would be the day she became his bride.

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